I can review what you've got so far or help to craft an original ceremony that conveys your sentiments perfectly. We can craft vows, passages, poems, readings that are solemn, funny, endearing, etc.
Secular people always seem to be troubled when it comes to performing ceremonies that have traditionally been the provenience of religion. I have always had a knack for being able to express those same sentiments without alluding to religion while preserving the solemnity and seriousness of the moment.
I am a writer and professional Master of Ceremonies and am an ordained wedding officiant through the Universal Life Church. I have been the newsletter editor and board member for Atheists United. I have always been interested in finding meaning in life.
I'm happy to answer any questions you might have.