Something about that state where the story is formed, but not yet polished. The potential is there just waiting to be brought out.
I've read scripts for years, worked on my own in my free time, and I read everything I can on screenwriting and storytelling.
Now that I've graduated university I've got even more time to dedicate to script reading and providing feedback. Give me a few days and I'll read through your feature length screenplay (or give me just a day to read your short script).
I'll provide you with detailed written feedback on:
- First impressions (those first few pages are crucial)
- Personal strengths and weaknesses in your writing
- What is / isn't working in your draft
- Story elements
- Answering any questions you have
Hopefully I'll get to read your script soon!
Provide feedback on your script
I will read your entire feature or short screenplay and provide feedback.