I will give you a full critique of your picture book with notes in the manuscript, a feedback letter, and comparative titles. Picture books are a special art form and one of my favorite things is helping writers make their work the best it can be while staying true to their own voice and vision. I will give comments, suggestions, or questions about story elements like opening, character, plot, language, logic, concept, etc. to help you revise.
I welcome the opportunity to help with stories that express diversity.
"I've had a lot of critiques and I can say Danielle's are top notch."
—Dev Petty,author of I Don't Want to be a Frog, I Don't Want to be Big, and Claymates (2017).
"Danielle is a true picture book expert and someone I trust implicitly with my work."
—Carter Higgins, author of Everything You Need for a Treehouse (2017) and This is Not a Valentine (2017).
If you'd like a quick critique of your revision after your full critique is completed, let me know and I can provide one at $20.
Please feel free to reach out and I can provide a custom offer for something specific like a phone call for story development.
I deliver within ten days.
I hope to hear from you!
I will give you notes in your manuscript, a personal feedback letter, and comparative titles