Coming up with a killer idea for a story is one thing; writing it is another. You may have begun drafting your project, hitting a few speed bumps along the way in the fight to keep the inspiration alive; but now you've hit a wall. On the other hand, your fingers may have barely made contact with the keyboard.
If you're unsure about how your film script or novel is progressing - or if it's even a good enough story to start putting your time and effort into - I'd be happy to evaluate your concept or current structure to see where you're going the right way and where you may need to backtrack and review.
I offer two services to help you improve your project:
I can write MARGIN NOTES on all the relevant documents sent to me. Afterwards, I will write a single paragraph giving you the main strengths and weaknesses of your story as it currently stands, and general suggestions you can apply.
I can do the aforementioned PLUS a DETAILED ANALYSIS of your story based on all the relevant documents given to me. I will exhaustively point out all the elements I believe requires changes or improvements in your script or novel.
I can do further evaluations as you improve your concept for $5 per service.