Hello fellow filmmakers! I have been in film/TV for over 10 years in both corporate and narrative work. As a producer, director and editor I have learned how to access short films and give notes on how to improve them. I also organize a short film festival.
In this gig, I will review your short film script and give you my personal feedback. It may be only a few lines of my general impression or a short list of things that I think can be approved on. If you need more feedback feel free to see my additional upgrades. This is great for both students and working filmmakers.
Please remember that although film is subjective there are a few rules that need to be used to create a well made film. Although, please take my critique as just as an opinion.
Short script critique
I will give you a simple critique on your short film script