I will critique the first 500 words of your young adult novel

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critique the first 500 words of your young adult novel
critique the first 500 words of your young adult novel

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About This Gig

Agents and editors read a lot of manuscripts. You only have one page to grab their attention and keep them reading, so you better make it count!

I will read and critique the first 500 words of your young adult novel. Just like with the editorial process (once you've sold that novel!), I will leave notes within the pages and will provide a mini editorial letter. 

When I read and critique, I look for the following things:

  • Does the opening sentence/paragraph hook the reader?
  • Distinct and consistent voice
  • Does the writing flow?
  • Is the concept/plot viable?
  • World building and setting
  • Character development

If you have any questions, please feel free to message me! I look forward to reading your work!

Frequently Asked Questions

  • What genres do you read?
    Any genre!
  • Do you read and critique non-fiction?
    Not at this time.
  • What if I'm unsure if my novel is YA?
    I can help you identify the appropriate age group for your novel!