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I will critique your picture book manuscript

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5.0

Chile

I speak English, Spanish

41 orders completed

PICTURE BOOK MANUSCRIPT AND QUERY CRITIQUES IN ENGLISH OR SPANISH

I am an agented children’s author who creates silly and heartfelt stories that invite children to look at their world from a different perspective. Over the years, I have won several micro fiction...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

Do you need a fresh look at your picture book manuscript? Or have a rough draft and are unsure where to take it?


I can help identify areas of your manuscript that need reworking and suggest how to tighten your writing by reducing word count, word choice, pacing, and more.


My critiquing style includes line comments as well as a one-page report with an overview of my comments on the plot, pacing, and arc of your story. I always highlight what works and what may need more attention in a manuscript.


I offer one free revision on each manuscript.


Let's work together to make your words sing!

 

Genre:

Children's books

Language:

English

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

Reviews

7 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Recommend to a friend
    5
  • Service as described
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    cmer87

    US

    United States

    5

    Kathleen was great to work with

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

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    sep29497

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Kathleen was very detailed with her critique and gave me some constructive advice. She was very knowledgeable about picture manuscripts. I will use her ideas in submitting them to an agent or publisher. I would use her again in the future.

    Helpful?
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  • M

    minoralicia

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Kathleen is thorough and analytical with her comments. She points out the weak parts that need improvement. She is very generous with helpful suggestions to move the story forward. I recommend her service to make your stories shine and succeed.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
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    kathleenalexis2

    Repeat Client

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Kathleen's critique was amazing. She took the time to provide detailed suggestions, comments and even helped with formatting.. and the turnaround was fast! Sometimes, you just need another set of eyes on your work, and I would totally recommend Kathleen's! I know I will be reaching out with another ms soon.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bmat2000

    US

    United States

    5

    Excellent feedback! It will make my manuscript stronger. I would definitely work with Kathleen again! I highly recommend her services.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
Reviews

7 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(7)
(0)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Recommend to a friend
    5
  • Service as described
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • C

    cmer87

    US

    United States

    5

    Kathleen was great to work with

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • S

    sep29497

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Kathleen was very detailed with her critique and gave me some constructive advice. She was very knowledgeable about picture manuscripts. I will use her ideas in submitting them to an agent or publisher. I would use her again in the future.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    minoralicia

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Kathleen is thorough and analytical with her comments. She points out the weak parts that need improvement. She is very generous with helpful suggestions to move the story forward. I recommend her service to make your stories shine and succeed.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • K
    image-docs

    kathleenalexis2

    Repeat Client

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Kathleen's critique was amazing. She took the time to provide detailed suggestions, comments and even helped with formatting.. and the turnaround was fast! Sometimes, you just need another set of eyes on your work, and I would totally recommend Kathleen's! I know I will be reaching out with another ms soon.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • B

    bmat2000

    US

    United States

    5

    Excellent feedback! It will make my manuscript stronger. I would definitely work with Kathleen again! I highly recommend her services.

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No