I will edit your Kickstarter project and give you my report with hints of how to improve it. I know how hard it is to write a Kickstarter project and try to get it right. Having run a successful Kickstarter project, and reaching over 615% of my goal, I know what it takes to get your project going off to a good start. Any feed back from someone with this experience is a plus and just gives you another set of eyes on your project.
Don't know what to say? I can help you write a solid description of your project. See my extra gigs.
The basic gig gives you only a brief edit. Please contact me first to see if I can help you.