I will critique your opening pages


About This Gig

Detailed feedback on your first 5 pages in these categories:

  1. Worldbuilding
  2. Characters
  3. Plot
  4. Pacing
  5. Conflict
  6. POV
  7. Prose
  8. Opening Hook

You will receive a word doc with comments in the margins as well as a summary of the overall effectiveness of you opening pages.

Order Details

2 days delivery

Developmental Edit Opening Pages

Detailed feedback of your first five pages (1,250 words). Developmental only. No line edits.

Number of words
Please enter the full word count of your script. Your price and delivery options will be calculated based on the script’s length.
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    Michele was extremely fast and gave me great tips. Sometimes critiques can seem off the mark, but I'm using every one of her suggestions. They all seemed legit.