I will be your TOUGHLOVE Beta reader

be your TOUGHLOVE Beta reader

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Description Hey, not too rough Hurt me plenty Ultra-violence
  A great option for writers wanting to sample the assessment experience. Are those hooks in deep enough? I'll focus on your character empathy and plot intrigue. An in-depth purge of weak areas, including content editing and in-line comments.
Feedback is suggestions about how a text's style, content and readability can be improved.
Words Included
Word count included in package (additional words may be available for purchase separately)
5000 5000 5000
Delivery time 3 days 3 days 3 days

About This Gig

WARNING: This gig is for fiction writers who are serious about taking their work to the next level. If you are not ready for professional criticism or want gentler feedback, then please look to my other gigs. This gig is for writers who aren't afraid of a lot of red ink. Sometimes, to fix a manuscript, you need to cut off an arm or a leg.

This assessment service includes:

In-depth feedback regarding your story arc, characterization, plot, pace, tone, clarity, structure, engagement, and if you've adequately 'hooked' the reader. 

Specific ideas and suggestions regarding how you can improve weak spots. I don't just highlight issues, but offer creative solutions as well.

Please contact me for a quote if you have a custom word count and I'll respond as soon as I can.

Until then, keep on writing!