WARNING: This gig is for fiction writers who are serious about taking their work to the next level. If you are not ready for professional criticism or want gentler feedback, then please look to my other gigs. This gig is for writers who aren't afraid of a lot of red ink. Sometimes, to fix a manuscript, you need to cut off an arm or a leg.
This assessment service includes:
In-depth feedback regarding your story arc, characterization, plot, pace, tone, clarity, structure, engagement, and if you've adequately 'hooked' the reader.
Specific ideas and suggestions regarding how you can improve weak spots. I don't just highlight issues, but offer creative solutions as well.
Please contact me for a quote if you have a custom word count and I'll respond as soon as I can.