I will help you create an amazing first chapter

help you create an amazing first chapter

Compare Packages

  $5 $10 $20




Description First Chapter Beta read Full Beta read with detailed report
  The first few lines make or break a book. I will tell you where your strong and weak points are. I will read your whole manuscript, and give you a few pros and cons and where to improve. Full read, with comments as I read about where to improve + min. 2 page review
Commercial Use
Commercial Use is the use of a delivery for any business related use intended for profit.
Words Included
Word count included in package (additional words may be available for purchase separately)
4000 60000 80000
The number of tweaks the seller includes.
Delivery time 4 days 7 days 7 days
  Select $5 Select $10 Select $20

About This Gig

What make or breaks a book?
The first sentence.

I'm here to help with that.
Usually when a manuscript is passed to a friend or family member, they sugar coat things. I do not. I will read the first chapter, and leave comments as I go to help you improve it, or the point where you lost my interest (it happens!) so you can have the best version of your writing. 

Frequently Asked Questions

  • Will you ghost write it for me?
    No, I just help improve.