The basic gig offers feedback on your screenplay, play or teleplay!
Plot, character, pace, dialogue, direction
risk, arcs, world creation, ,format, and marketability
You should know what a Reader will think of your work before submitting it to a contest or production company. Is your script chatty or too on-the-nose? Is the story-line clear? Are characters fleshed out? Do you pet-the-dog, endearing your characters to your audience? Is the risk set to make your readers turn pages? Do you follow screenwriting format and industry standards? Do you over or underwrite directions? Do you properly draw your characters and world for a visual telling? Is the concept (and execution) of you story marketable?
In addition, you may ask up to 10 specific questions concerning your manuscript.
New screenwriters, ESL writers, or those writing out-side their genre or "outside the box" -
You need critical eyes on your script, not just feedback from family , friends, or writers groups!
Get inexpensive, honest feedback from an experienced former SoCal production company reader.
Scripts must be in English
Scripts must be under 110 pages
Script Review Service
Basic coverage and feedback on your script, play or teleplay.
- Up to 100 Words