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Hi, I'm Naomi, a professional beta reader and story critic specializing in novels, memoirs, fanfiction, devotionals, and other manuscripts.

I provide thoughtful, honest feedback that helps authors refine their stories before publication. My critiques focus on what readers actually experience, giving you clear, actionable insights into your manuscript's strengths and the areas that need improvement.

My feedback covers:

• Whether your opening captures attention and keeps readers engaged.
• Scenes that feel slow, repetitive, or disrupt the pacing.
• Areas where the language may be overly technical or difficult to follow.
• The originality and effectiveness of your plot.
• Whether your ending feels earned, satisfying, and emotionally impactful.
• How well the story maintains tension, conflict, and momentum.
• Whether the dialogue sounds authentic and fits each character's voice.

My goal is to provide constructive, reader-focused feedback that helps you strengthen your manuscript while preserving your unique voice and vision.

Let's get your book honest, detailed feedback that will move your story forward, I'd be happy to help.

Get in touch today!