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I will beta read your mystery, thriller or fantasy novel
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Hey! I'm a graphic designer from Morocco who enjoys creating clean and engaging visuals. I’m passionate about storytelling through design and get a lot of inspiration from books, movies, and manga.
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About this Gig
First of all, well done on finishing your novel! I understand how difficult and intimate writing can be, and I would love to provide you new, insightful criticism to help you improve.
Are you looking for honest, detailed feedback on your book before publishing? I specialize in mystery, thriller and fantasy helping writers refine their stories with in-depth critiques.
What I Offer:
- Spotting plot inconsistencies & character flaws
- In-depth feedback (overall analysis + chapter-by-chapter breakdown)
- Inline comments for real-time suggestions
- Reader experience rating (pacing, engagement, emotional impact)
- Brief marketability report (who your target readers are & book appeal)
- Clarifications on feedback if needed
I have beta-read for friends and Fiverr clients, written my own stories, and critiqued stories in some articles for years. I approach every book as both a critical reader and a fan of storytelling. Your book gets honest, constructive, and actionable insights!
Lets make your story the best it can be before it reaches the world.
P.S: I don't read erotica, but I wouldn't mind one or two "spicy" scenes.
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English
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French
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What kind of feedback do you give?
I provide a mix of general story analysis and inline comments. My feedback covers plot structure, pacing, character development, engagement, and potential inconsistencies. I also include a reader experience rating to gauge how immersive your book feels.
Do you edit grammar and spelling?
No, I am a beta reader, not an editor. My focus is on storytelling, plot, and character analysis. However, I may flag major grammatical issues that affect readability.
What file formats do you accept?
I prefer Google Docs for inline comments but can also work with Word documents or PDFs.
Can I ask follow-up questions?
Absolutely! I provide clarifications on my feedback so you fully understand my suggestions.
What genres do you beta read?
I specialize in mystery, thriller, fantasy, and romance, but I’m open to other fiction genres. Feel free to message me before ordering!
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I’m so happy I took a chance on this seller. They did a fantastic job providing over 200 inline comments on my manuscript. It was great to read all the reactions. The feedback was super helpful. Thank you for your hard work!
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F far_silv
Sweden
I’m so happy I took a chance on this seller. They did a fantastic job providing over 200 inline comments on my manuscript. It was great to read all the reactions. The feedback was super helpful. Thank you for your hard work!
Up to $50
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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