I will help you fix your story through developmental editing
Developmental Editor and Beta Reader
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Did your manuscript receive negative feedback, and you're unsure how to fix it?
You've polished your text, yet beta readers still say the "pacing is off" or they "couldn't connect with the lead." Most authors try to fix this by editing sentences. But the issue isn't your writing style, it's the narrative foundation.
I don't focus on your grammar or voice; I focus on the story structure and character design. If your readers aren't feeling the story, I'll find out why and tell you exactly how to fix it.
Why hire me? I don't just point out flaws; I provide actionable solutions to:
- Eliminate Narrative Dead Weight: Ensuring every scene is necessary and leads to a cathartic resolution.
- Refine Character Arcs: Ensuring your protagonist's choices drive the plot organically.
- Fix Pacing Issues: Locating where the tension drops and providing a roadmap to bridge the gaps.
What you receive: A comprehensive Technical Audit Report designed to help you fix your story's structure, character arcs, and pacing.
Questions? Send me a message, and let's get your story back on track.
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FAQ
Do you provide line editing or proofreading?
No. My focus is exclusively on Developmental Editing and Narrative Architecture. I don’t polish sentences or fix typos; I fix the story’s foundation. If your plot is broken, no amount of proofreading will save it. I provide the map so you can rewrite with confidence.
What genres do you specialize in?
I specialize in Fiction, with a deep focus on Romance and Romantasy. Whether it’s ensuring the "romantic beats" land perfectly or checking the internal logic of your world-building, I ensure your story’s engine is running smoothly regardless of the genre.
My book is already finished. Is it too late for a Developmental Audit?
Not at all. In fact, many authors come to me after a finished draft fails to connect with beta readers. It’s better to fix the structural foundation now than to publish a book that feels "stuck" or "slow" to your audience.
Will you rewrite my story for me?
No. Your voice is yours alone. My Technical Audit Report tells you what is wrong and how to fix it, but you remain the architect of your words. I provide the structural blueprint; you do the building.
Can I send you just a few chapters for a "First Look"?
Yes! If you aren't ready for a full manuscript audit, I offer a "First Look" package. This helps identify recurring structural issues or character inconsistencies early on, saving you dozens of hours of revision later.
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Brazil
Damares superou nossas expectativas, fez uma leitura atenta, destacou as alterações necessárias e nos auxiliou na melhoria da qualidade do nosso manuscrito. Recomendo!
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2 weeks
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Uruguay
Exceptional, thorough work that will help me improve my novel and meet reader expectations.
$50
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4 weeks
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T thaismoreth

Brazil
Damares superou nossas expectativas, fez uma leitura atenta, destacou as alterações necessárias e nos auxiliou na melhoria da qualidade do nosso manuscrito. Recomendo!
$50
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2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?S sofiatorv

Uruguay
Exceptional, thorough work that will help me improve my novel and meet reader expectations.
$50
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4 weeks
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