I will help you fix your story through developmental editing

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Brazil

I speak English, Portuguese

47 orders completed

Developmental Editor and Beta Reader

With my background as a fiction writer and my academic expertise, I offer a unique perspective on building stories that resonate. I am a Literature graduate and a Cambridge-certified (CAE) fluent Engl...

Level 1

Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.

About this Gig

Did your manuscript receive negative feedback, and you're unsure how to fix it?


You've polished your text, yet beta readers still say the "pacing is off" or they "couldn't connect with the lead." Most authors try to fix this by editing sentences. But the issue isn't your writing style, it's the narrative foundation.


I don't focus on your grammar or voice; I focus on the story structure and character design. If your readers aren't feeling the story, I'll find out why and tell you exactly how to fix it.


Why hire me? I don't just point out flaws; I provide actionable solutions to:


  • Eliminate Narrative Dead Weight: Ensuring every scene is necessary and leads to a cathartic resolution.
  • Refine Character Arcs: Ensuring your protagonist's choices drive the plot organically.
  • Fix Pacing Issues: Locating where the tension drops and providing a roadmap to bridge the gaps.


What you receive: A comprehensive Technical Audit Report designed to help you fix your story's structure, character arcs, and pacing.


Questions? Send me a message, and let's get your story back on track.

Language:

English

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Portuguese

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Fanfiction

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Horror/ thriller

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Mystery

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Romance

Audience :

General readers

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Teen / young adult

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Adult

POV:

First person

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Second person

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Third person limited

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

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Intermediate

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Advanced

Voice:

Other

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    thaismoreth

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    Brazil

    5

    Damares superou nossas expectativas, fez uma leitura atenta, destacou as alterações necessárias e nos auxiliou na melhoria da qualidade do nosso manuscrito. Recomendo!

    $50

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    2 weeks

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    sofiatorv

    UY

    Uruguay

    5

    Exceptional, thorough work that will help me improve my novel and meet reader expectations.

    $50

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    4 weeks

    Duration

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  • Seller communication level
    5
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    5
  • Value of delivery
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    thaismoreth

    BR

    Brazil

    5

    Damares superou nossas expectativas, fez uma leitura atenta, destacou as alterações necessárias e nos auxiliou na melhoria da qualidade do nosso manuscrito. Recomendo!

    $50

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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  • S

    sofiatorv

    UY

    Uruguay

    5

    Exceptional, thorough work that will help me improve my novel and meet reader expectations.

    $50

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No