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I will beta read your historical fiction or fantasy
Teacher, writer, beta reader
I'm a college lecturer and I've been teaching English since 2008. I've worked in Japan, Italy, Poland, Abu Dhabi and England.
I'm proud to have worked on several published novels, and have publish...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Welcome fellow writer! I will give you honest feedback from an avid reader who also has 13 years experience teaching English. Many beta readers promise a professional service, but how many spend their working life teaching people to write?
In my report, I will give my professional opinion on:
- Your character development.
- Any plot holes I find.
- The effectiveness of your dialogue.
- How well you integrate worldbuilding.
- Any repeated grammar and punctuation errors.
- How immersive your description is.
- The realism of any fight scenes.
I will do this constructively and positively, and always bearing in mind that this is your story. I will draw on my background as a fellow writer and as a college lecturer to help make your novel or short story truly shine.
I look forward to reading your work!
Language:
English
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36 reviews for this Gig
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willc277
United Kingdom
Daniel went beyond what I was expecting and delivered quickly. His notes were exceptionally helpful, and I'm sure they will improve my manuscript. I would highly recommend Daniel if you're looking for something similar.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J joshuawright269
United States
This was exceptional, honest feedback. It's going to take me a while to integrate his insights into the manuscript, which is what we are all looking for, right? I'd work with the seller again in a heartbeat.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?V vincerockston
Switzerland
Daniel worked speedily through my book and delivered both a chapter-by-chapter review and an overall summary, including specific suggestions. He is clearly a very competent analyser of English prose and his comments were phrased in a respectful and encouraging way, even when critical. I now have a whole lot of ideas for improvement.
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?J jwaksman
United States
Thorough review and edits. A lot of good changes to improve a first draft.
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jamesraynor760
United States
An outstanding, in-depth critique of my work that was actionable, respectful, and insightful. I sent him a large novel and he returned it with extensive notes well before the due date. His recommendations were spot on and gave me a clear path forward. Highly recommend
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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36 reviews for this Gig
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W willc277
United Kingdom
Daniel went beyond what I was expecting and delivered quickly. His notes were exceptionally helpful, and I'm sure they will improve my manuscript. I would highly recommend Daniel if you're looking for something similar.
$50-$100
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J joshuawright269
United States
This was exceptional, honest feedback. It's going to take me a while to integrate his insights into the manuscript, which is what we are all looking for, right? I'd work with the seller again in a heartbeat.
$50-$100
Price
6 days
Duration
Helpful?V vincerockston
Switzerland
Daniel worked speedily through my book and delivered both a chapter-by-chapter review and an overall summary, including specific suggestions. He is clearly a very competent analyser of English prose and his comments were phrased in a respectful and encouraging way, even when critical. I now have a whole lot of ideas for improvement.
$50-$100
Price
12 days
Duration
Helpful?J jwaksman
United States
Thorough review and edits. A lot of good changes to improve a first draft.
$100-$200
Price
2 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jamesraynor760
United States
An outstanding, in-depth critique of my work that was actionable, respectful, and insightful. I sent him a large novel and he returned it with extensive notes well before the due date. His recommendations were spot on and gave me a clear path forward. Highly recommend
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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