I will beta read your story and provide honest feedback

4.9
4.9

Pakistan

I speak English

192 orders completed

Helping your words reach their full potential

Hi, I’m Sarah, a graduate researcher and writer blending creative insight with technical expertise. I provide beta reading, developmental feedback, and content critique to help your writing shine. Fro...

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About this Gig


Hi there,


Congratulations on coming this far in developing your story. I respect the hard work and passion you've put in your novel and now, I'm here to provide you with honest and constructive feedback to help you revise your manuscript.


My feedback includes detailed in-line comments that capture my reactions, emotions, and observations as I read through your story and a comprehensive reader report with commentary on structure and analysis of your manuscript.


My critique will focus on:

  • Structure
  • Theme
  • Plot
  • Setting
  • Character Development
  • Conflict and resolution


I will also provide honest and objective feedback on:

  • Character likability
  • Tension and rhythm
  • Flow
  • Dialogue/Language use
  • Tone
  • Reader engagement and
  • Whatever sticks out


I enjoy reading thrillers, science fiction, fantasy, horror, and romance stories.


Key features of my services are honesty, meticulous attention, and constructive analysis of your story to help bring it to publishing standards.


I welcome all genres and would love to beta-read your story, so feel free to message me or place an order.

P.s always open to customized orders.


I look forward to being a part of your journey.


-Sarah <3

Genre:

Literary fiction

Memoir/ biography

Philosophy

Psychology

Language:

English

Urdu

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

My Portfolio

Reviews

68 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
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    stevenx88

    US

    United States

    5

    she did exceptional job at great price. plan use her again.

    $200-$400

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
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  • R

    rickychahal1991

    GB

    United Kingdom

    4

    She did what I asked for and I'm happy with the result

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

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    massage320

    US

    United States

    4.3

    Sarah Shabbir's beta reading services were solid, though there is room for improvement. The quality of delivery could be closer to the brief with enhanced professionalism and attention to detail. Working with her was generally smooth, but increased cooperation, quicker response times, and a higher level of effort would be beneficial.

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

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    chaspendelton

    US

    United States

    5

    Sarah is very polite and pays attention to details. She is quite fluent in the English language and always tries her best to make sure that the work she provides is exceptional.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

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    chaspendelton

    US

    United States

    5

    Sarah is an exceptional beta reader! We've been working together since March of 2023, and that alone should tell you how incredible her reports are.

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

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    Helpful?
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Reviews

68 reviews for this Gig
4.9

(66)
(2)
(0)
(0)
(0)
Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    5
Sort By
Most relevant
  • S

    stevenx88

    US

    United States

    5

    she did exceptional job at great price. plan use her again.

    $200-$400

    Price

    4 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • R

    rickychahal1991

    GB

    United Kingdom

    4

    She did what I asked for and I'm happy with the result

    $50-$100

    Price

    7 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    massage320

    US

    United States

    4.3

    Sarah Shabbir's beta reading services were solid, though there is room for improvement. The quality of delivery could be closer to the brief with enhanced professionalism and attention to detail. Working with her was generally smooth, but increased cooperation, quicker response times, and a higher level of effort would be beneficial.

    $50-$100

    Price

    4 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    chaspendelton

    US

    United States

    5

    Sarah is very polite and pays attention to details. She is quite fluent in the English language and always tries her best to make sure that the work she provides is exceptional.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • C
    image-docs

    chaspendelton

    US

    United States

    5

    Sarah is an exceptional beta reader! We've been working together since March of 2023, and that alone should tell you how incredible her reports are.

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Worksample image
    Helpful?
    Yes
    No