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I will critique your fantasy or sci fi opening for structure and reader engagement
About this Gig
Manuscript Critiques for Sci-Fi & Fantasy (SFF)
Is your SFF manuscript ready for readers, or are they losing interest?
I provide high-level critiques focused on structure, momentum, and market alignment to help you revise with clarity before querying or publishing.
Note: This is editorial analysis, not line editing.
What I Evaluate
Depending on your package, feedback covers:
- Hook & Inciting Incident: Effectiveness and placement.
- Momentum: Stakes, escalation, and pacing red flags.
- Character: Protagonist agency and reader engagement.
- Market Fit: Subgenre alignment and title comps.
- Payoff: Setup vs. resolution (for full-arc packages).
Scope and depth increase by package, from focused opening diagnostics to full promise-vs-payoff evaluation.
Packages
- Spark Check: Focused opening critique.
- Spark Check Plus: Opening arc, market fit, and title comps.
- Ignite Check: Opening and ending evaluation.
Bonus: Indie Launch Checklist included with all orders.
Who This Is For
- SFF Authors Only: Indie or querying writers refining drafts.
- Strategic Fixes: For those who want to solve big-picture problems first.
Strong openings attract readers; strong endings keep them. Let's polish yours.
Genre:
Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Is this developmental editing, line editing, copyediting, or proofreading?
No. This is big-picture editorial analysis focused on structure, momentum, and reader engagement. I do not correct grammar, rewrite prose, or provide tracked changes.
What file formats do you accept?
I only work with Word documents (.doc or .docx). While feedback is delivered as a written report rather than in-line edits, I take detailed internal notes so I can reference specific passages accurately in the final report.
What will I receive when the order is complete?
You’ll receive a written editorial report tailored to your package, with specific recommendations listed in priority order. I may reference particular lines or moments, but this is not an annotated manuscript.
What genres do you work with?
I specialize in science fiction and fantasy (SFF). I believe genre conventions are crucial for getting openings and pacing right, so I stick to what I know best to ensure you get the most value. For that reason, I work exclusively within SFF and do not critique other genres.
Will you tell me how to fix the issues you identify?
Yes. You’ll receive actionable revision priorities and clear guidance on how to move forward. I won’t rewrite the manuscript for you, but I explain the "why" behind every critique so you have a concrete roadmap for your next draft.
Can I send more words than the package allows?
No. Each package has a firm word limit. If your manuscript exceeds it, please upgrade to the appropriate package or message me before ordering.
Are revisions or follow-ups included?
Revisions are not included in these types of reviews. I’m happy to clarify feedback if something is unclear, but this service does not include additional critique rounds.
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As an author, I find myself balancing between the pace and the storyline, sorting how to move characters throughout the tale. Having someone like Kris who can review, offer honest feedback with clear suggestions to make the story better is amazing. The tale just reads better with his suggestions! I...
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T thinkmikea
United States
As an author, I find myself balancing between the pace and the storyline, sorting how to move characters throughout the tale. Having someone like Kris who can review, offer honest feedback with clear suggestions to make the story better is amazing. The tale just reads better with his suggestions! I...
Up to $50
Price
4 days
Duration
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