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I will developmental edit and fix your story, structure, pacing, characters
About this Gig
Are you confident your manuscripts structure, pacing, and character arcs are working at their full potential?
Developmental editing goes beyond grammar. It focuses on the foundation of your story the elements that determine whether readers stay invested or put the book down.
I provide in-depth developmental feedback tailored to your manuscripts genre, goals, and audience.
Depending on the package selected, I will:
-Analyze plot structure and narrative cohesion
-Evaluate character arcs and internal conflict
-Identify pacing issues and engagement drops
-Flag inconsistencies, logic gaps, and weak motivations
-Provide clear, actionable feedback
-Deliver a structured editorial letter outlining strengths and areas for improvement.
My approach is thorough, analytical, and direct.
I don't rewrite your voice, I help you strengthen it through professional manuscript critique and structural insight.
If you're looking for surface-level proofreading / copyediting, this may not be the right service. If you're ready to elevate the foundation of your story, I'd be happy to work with you.
Feel free to message me before ordering so we can determine the best package for your manuscript.
Language:
English
Genre:
Horror/ thriller
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Romance
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Science fiction
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Fantasy
Audience :
General readers
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Teen / young adult
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Adult
POV:
First person
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Third person limited
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Multiple POVs
Complexity level:
Intermediate
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Advanced
Voice:
Active
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What is Developmental Editing?
Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of your manuscript, including plot structure, character arcs, pacing, narrative cohesion, and overall story impact. It does NOT focus on grammar or line-by-line copyediting.
Do you provide Proofreading or Copyediting?
No. This service focuses on structural and developmental feedback. If you're looking for grammar correction or line editing, this gig may not be the right fit.
How detailed is the Editorial Letter?
The Editorial Letter included in the Standard package provides a structured analysis of your manuscript's strengths and weaknesses. The Premium package includes the Editorial Letter along with in-line comments, actionable feedback, and a clear revision roadmap.
Do you rewrite my manuscript in the Premium package?
No. I do not rewrite your manuscript. If something isn't working, I will explain why, reference specific examples, and provide actionable suggestions. My goal is to strengthen your structure, execution, and storytelling while preserving your original voice and vision.
