I will provide a professional editorial assessment

Is your manuscript finished but something feels off? You can't quite put your finger on it but you know it's not ready yet.

That's exactly where I come in.

I'm a developmental editor specializing in fiction: fantasy, sci-fi, romance, thriller, and literary fiction. I will read your entire manuscript with fresh eyes and deliver a comprehensive editorial assessment that tells you exactly what's working, what isn't, and why.

What you'll receive:

1. A 1,500 to 3,000 word editorial letter covering structure, pacing, character arcs, plot holes, theme, and overall story logic.
2. A prioritized revision roadmap so you know what to fix first, second, and third.
3. Honest, constructive feedback that respects your vision while pushing your story to its full potential.

This service is ideal for:

• Writers preparing to query literary agents
• Self-publishing authors who want professional feedback before publishing
• Writers who have finished a draft and feel stuck

I do not do line edits or proofreading in this service. This is purely big-picture, story-level feedback.

All manuscripts are kept strictly confidential.

Questions before ordering? Send me a message. I'm happy to chat about your project first.