I will help you refine every point of your story
Developmental Editor
About this Gig
Have a story you love but aren't sure how to make it stronger? I'm here to help.
I offer thoughtful, reader-focused developmental editing for fiction authors who want to strengthen their manuscripts while keeping their unique voice intact.
I'll look at the bigger picture of your story, including:
- Character development and arcs
- Plot structure and story cohesion
- Pacing and tension
- POV and narrative consistency
- Conflict and stakes
- Scene effectiveness
- Continuity and potential plot holes
- Overall reader experience
You'll receive an annotated manuscript with detailed, actionable feedback. I'll point out what's working, identify areas that may need strengthening, and explain why something isn't landing so you can make informed decisions during revision.
My goal isn't to rewrite your story or make it sound like mine. Your voice and vision stay at the center of the editing process.
I approach every manuscript as both an editor and a reader: looking closely at the craft while also considering how the story feels from the reader's perspective.
Please message me before ordering so we can make sure your manuscript and editing needs are a good fit for the package you're considering.
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FAQ
How do I choose the right package?
Packages are based on manuscript length. Basic includes up to 80k words, Standard includes up to 120k words, and Premium includes up to 160k words. Additional words can be purchased in 10k-word increments, with each package available up to the next pricing tier. 200k+ words require custom offer.
What does your developmental edit offer?
I review character development, plot and story structure, pacing, POV, conflict, stakes, scene effectiveness, continuity, and overall reader experience. You'll receive an annotated manuscript with detailed, actionable feedback.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. Developmental editing focuses on identifying opportunities to strengthen your story while preserving your unique voice and vision. I'll provide recommendations and explain the reasoning behind my feedback rather than rewriting your work for you.

