I will do a critique of one page

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do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page
do a critique of one page

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  I'll critique the first two pages of your novel, short story, or nonfiction work. I'll critique three to six pages of your novel, short story, or nonfiction work. I'll critique the eight to twelve pages of your novel, short story, or nonfiction work.
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This Package includes 500 words. For each additional 250 words, the price is $10.
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About This Gig

Want to know how agents look at the first page of your sample chapters? Now you can find that out. I am a literary agent with the Leslie H. Stobbe Literary Agency, but I was a writer before I became an agent, and I know how hungry writers are for professional feedback.  

One of the hardest things about form rejections is that there is no way to learn what you're doing right and what you're doing wrong. Send your work, and I'll tell you exactly how I would examine your sample pages if it came into my submissions mailbox. (No picture books, please.)

This  is a critique of my initial reaction to your page covering premise, character, voice, dialogue, grammar and punctuation issues.

I don't work on Sundays, so please don't order a 24-hour gig on a Saturday night or a Sunday morning. Thanks!