I will edit your query letter for querying literary agents

4.9
4.9

United States

I speak English

46 orders completed

I am a Junior Literary Agent offering editing services for authors

My name is Amanda Carbonell, I am an author as well as a former literary agent with Belcastro Literary Agency. Prior to this, I had interned with CMA, Inc. and ArtHouse Literary. I freelance edit for ...

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About this Gig

I am offering my services to querying authors looking to obtain a literary agent. I was a Junior Literary Agent with Belcastro Literary Agency and have successfully been through the query trenches twice myself. I have also interned with CMA, Inc. (Creative Media Agency, Inc.) & ArtHouse Literary.


I will:

  • Provide feedback on your query letter, synopsis, or first chapter with suggestions for edits
  • Help you brainstorm ways to hook an agent while being concise
  • Check for flow/readability
  • Make sure the stakes in your story shine through your materials while being concise


Having a second pair of eyes to look over your submission materials is sometimes just what your book needs! I would be an outsider looking into your book, allowing me to tell you what's working and what isn't.


Please note that I will NOT write any material for you. I also do not edit AI created stories nor do I use any AI to edit! All edits are done by me.


I have helped over 200 authors and counting go from zero requests to partials/fulls all the way to landing representation and more. I would love to help!


All edits will be done through Microsoft Word using Track Changes.

editingtales.com is my site for more info

Language:

English

Genre:

Action

Adventure

Children’s books

Fanfiction

History

Audience :

General readers

Children

Teen / young adult

Adult

POV:

First person

Third person limited

Third person omniscient

Complexity level:

Simple / easy read

Intermediate

Advanced

Voice:

Other

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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    tenamesaric2

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    Croatia

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    Amanda did a very good job with my query letter and synopsis. It's clear that she has the eye of an agent and knows how to make the materials sound professional and clear. Her feedback definitely improved the quality of my query package. However, I sometimes wished that the comments were more actionable and detailed. Overall, great experience.

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

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    mikec6645

    US

    United States

    5

    Amanda knows what she's talking about. She helped my query letter in more ways than one and gave me suggestions that made sense and honest. She's professional and incredibly generous.

    Up to $50

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    3 days

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    morganegey

    FR

    France

    5

    Quick and useful feedback!

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    5 days

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    merlinluna101

    US

    United States

    5

    Amanda is so great, she's so helpful and I appreciate how kind she is. I'd definitely ask for her help again in the future!

    Up to $50

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    6 days

    Duration

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    merlinluna101

    US

    United States

    5

    Amanda was so helpful! I took her suggestions, showed it to my writing group who loved it, and submitted it to my first agent. She is kind and great to work with. I would definitely reach out to her again.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
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22 reviews for this Gig
4.9

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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    4.9
  • Quality of delivery
    4.9
  • Value of delivery
    4.9
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  • T

    tenamesaric2

    HR

    Croatia

    4

    Amanda did a very good job with my query letter and synopsis. It's clear that she has the eye of an agent and knows how to make the materials sound professional and clear. Her feedback definitely improved the quality of my query package. However, I sometimes wished that the comments were more actionable and detailed. Overall, great experience.

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    mikec6645

    US

    United States

    5

    Amanda knows what she's talking about. She helped my query letter in more ways than one and gave me suggestions that made sense and honest. She's professional and incredibly generous.

    Up to $50

    Price

    3 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M
    image-docs

    morganegey

    FR

    France

    5

    Quick and useful feedback!

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    merlinluna101

    US

    United States

    5

    Amanda is so great, she's so helpful and I appreciate how kind she is. I'd definitely ask for her help again in the future!

    Up to $50

    Price

    6 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • M

    merlinluna101

    US

    United States

    5

    Amanda was so helpful! I took her suggestions, showed it to my writing group who loved it, and submitted it to my first agent. She is kind and great to work with. I would definitely reach out to her again.

    Up to $50

    Price

    5 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No