I will polish your query letter or pitch for agents and producers

polish your query letter  or pitch for agents and producers

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  Revise and tighten up your existing query with a catchy HOOK to pull agents in. Rewrite, or write from scratch, your entire query with a hook, the body, and bio. Write your query from scratch, edit your synopsis, and edit the first 10 pages of your novel.
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There is an anatomy and science to the query letter that Hollywood screenwriters have tapped into that you won't learn about in your college creative writing classes. I didn't.  After 11 months work in Hollywood I adapted the "pitch" for the fiction query. You need a catchy hook with the right elements. Your query should read in the active voice, not like a summary, and all B,C, & D stories must be tossed and there must be tension.

I will polish your fiction query letter or pitch for literary agents and producers. (Fiction only, no non-fiction proposals.) I will help you identify key areas of your query or pitch that may be stopping an agent from reading further by line-by-line editing the one-page query.  I will also help you get to the meat of the story  (the "A" storyline) so it flows to the end.

Please help me streamline the process by including in one concise sentence: your protagonist, setting, conflict/tension, title, word count, and genre. Send this in a message with your attached query.

****Please include your synopsis, a list of characters, and the main theme of your script or novel while ordering.******

Thanks for your order! I look forward to working with you. -Sarah