I will beta read YA fiction chapters

beta read YA fiction chapters
beta read YA fiction chapters

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Description Initial Hook Initial 3 Chapters First 4-6 chapters
  Includes a review of the strength of the HOOK of your first chapter Focus on strength of your 3 chapters. Is the story drawing me in? Do I want more? Review of the hook, the draw and the overall appeal of your story for first 4-6 chapters.
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About This Gig

 BETA READER for your Young Adult or Middle Grade novel.

I will be your TEEN beta reader.   I will read and critique your novel, or work in progress.  

I am a teen guy who is a huge reader.  I do not just read, I analyze and critique.  I adore a great story and characters that stick with you.    I will give you an honest insight to a teen guy's brain.  

I will read and comment on your YA or MG book.   Any genre is great but Science Fiction and Fantasy are my favorites.   I am also good with humor, historical fiction, real life, dystopian, steampunk & other similar genres. 

I am not an editor.  I am offering a teen guy's perspective on the appeal and quality of your story.   I will focus on:

  • Character development
  • Teen portrayal
  • Setting and World Building
  • Strength of opening and hook
  • Any parts that I think are awesome

This gig offers in-depth reviews of first chapters.   If you would like me to read more, you will probably like my other gig.  Check out my gig for full manuscripts.  I also can set up a custom order.  

No erotica or graphic adult themes, please. 

Frequently Asked Questions

  • Do you also read full manuscripts?
    Absolutely! Check out my other gig for full manuscripts. If not sure, just message me.
  • Can you review graphic novels or comic books?
    You bet. I love them. A pdf file usually works or if they are available online, I can review them that way.
  • How old are you? Are you a typical teen?
    I am 17 years old and a high school senior. I don't know what a typical teen is but, I do like movies, music, video games. I get stressed out over school and other life things. Does that make me typical?