I will beta read YA fiction chapters

beta read YA fiction chapters

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Description Initial Hook Initial 3 Chapters First 4-6 chapters
  Includes a review of the strength of the HOOK of your first chapter Focus on strength of your 3 chapters. Is the story drawing me in? Do I want more? Review of the hook, the draw and the overall appeal of your story for first 4-6 chapters.
Words Included
Word count included in package (additional words may be available for purchase separately)
3000 5000 10000
Delivery Time 14 days 21 days 21 days

About This Gig

 BETA READER for your Young Adult or Middle Grade novel.

I will be your TEEN beta reader.   I will read and critique your novel, or work in progress.  

I am a teen guy who is a huge reader.  I do not just read, I analyze and critique.  I adore a great story and characters that stick with you.    I will give you an honest insight to a teen guy's brain.  

I will read and comment on your YA or MG book.   Any genre is great but Science Fiction and Fantasy are my favorites.   I am also good with humor, historical fiction, real life, dystopian, steampunk & other similar genres. 

I am not an editor.  I am offering a teen guy's perspective on the appeal and quality of your story.   I will focus on:

  • Character development
  • Teen portrayal
  • Setting and World Building
  • Strength of opening and hook
  • Any parts that I think are awesome

This gig offers in-depth reviews of first chapters.   If you would like me to read more, you will probably like my other gig.  Check out my gig for full manuscripts.  I also can set up a custom order.  

No erotica or graphic adult themes, please. 

Frequently Asked Questions

  • Do you also read full manuscripts?
    Absolutely! Check out my other gig for full manuscripts. If not sure, just message me.
  • Can you review graphic novels or comic books?
    You bet. I love them. A pdf file usually works or if they are available online, I can review them that way.
  • How old are you? Are you a typical teen?
    I am 17 years old and a high school senior. I don't know what a typical teen is but, I do like movies, music, video games. I get stressed out over school and other life things. Does that make me typical?