Every script could use a little outside intervention and outlandish intervention!
I've written hundreds of standup and sketch comedy jokes for myself and others, along with several full length comedic plays and have worked on quite a few independent movies.
For just one gig, I'll consult with you about your project and give you a firm custom quote based on my projected hourly on your project. I'll also give you my immediate general feedback on your script. Does not include dialogue or situational/ action suggestions.