I will review and provide feedback on your college admissions essay

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review and provide feedback on your college admissions essay

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Description Review Feedback Feedback PLUS
  Report on problem areas, overall assessment and broad suggestions for improvement In-tracked feedback and detailed suggestions on ideas, structure, style, language and grammar. In-tracked feedback plus video report detailing my suggestions
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Feedback is suggestions about how a text's style, content and readability can be improved.
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This Package includes 800 words. For each additional 250 words, the price is $5.
This Package includes 800 words. For each additional 250 words, the price is $5.
This Package includes 800 words. For each additional 250 words, the price is $5.
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About This Gig

I specialize in high-quality academic feedback.

I hold two degrees from the University of Oxford and am an experienced teacher and educational consultant.

This Gig covers the US College Admissions Essay:

In keeping with CommonApp and colleges' academic honesty standards, I will not write your essay for you. 

Instead, I provide detailed feedback and suggestions how you can improve your own work, in particular how you can:

- phrase your ideas, 
- highlight your abilities and skills, 
- write with eloquence, 
- and structure your thoughts with logic.

The Basic package is a review document (+/- 250-300 words) highlighting areas for improvement and overall suggestions. 
The Standard package is an in-tracked document with detailed, in-depth feedback for ideas, style, language, etc. (Recommended option!)
For extra support, select my Premium "Feedback PLUS" service which includes a video file in which I explain my suggestions in detail.

One order includes 800 words (Basic, Standard and Premium). Add 250 words at a time for only $5.

Make sure you give honest answers to the required questions when placing your order.

Any question? Just get in touch :)

-Nils




Frequently Asked Questions

  • What qualifies you to read my essay?
    I hold a double-degree from the University of Oxford and know from the inside what universities and colleges are looking for. I am also a qualified English language teacher who knows how to bring the best out of his students' language ability.
  • Can you write my essay for me?
    No. Handing in an essay that is not yours is dishonest and I will have no part in dishonesty. Know this: if you are caught with an essay that you did not write, it will result in your application being rejected immediately.
  • How much experience do you have?
    As a teacher, I have been helping students with their admissions essays for years, across three different countries. Students that wrote with my guidance were accepted in universities as top-end as Brown, Stanford and Yale.
  • Are you an editing service?
    Define "editing". No, I will not edit your essay by changing your language to mine. Of course, I will highlight words and phrases that need improvement and then make suggestions how you can make them better yourself. This way, your whole essay will be yours.