Getting valuable notes on your screenplay is imperative if you want to improve on it. Without them you won't be able to see what is working and what's not when you start a rewrite, and you HAVE to rewrite your screenplay. No one sells a first draft.
Many new screenwriters fail because once they finish their script, they simply don't know what to do with it. So they enter expensive contests or post it up on Amazon Studios without having anyone read it and offer notes.
I will read your 5 pages and add sticky note comments wherever I feel something could be improved or changed.
You can spend $100+ on the many screenplay services available online. But why waste all that money when I can help you for $5?
Contact me if you're interested in making your screenplay the best it can be!