Everybody knows - there are two foolproof ways to fame and fortune in the 21st century:
1) Create a hit TV show! 2) Charge others $30 to help them create a hit TV show and hope to go along for the ride!
I'm not taking any chances - I'm aggressively pursuing all options.
For $30, I am offering to buy my way into your circle of trust by giving you honest and industry-appropriate feedback on your TV pilot script (Comedy up to 35 pages), while giving myself a legitimate excuse to not be doing any screenwriting of my own.
It's a win-win situation at a bargain price!
I'll give you notes on:
Structure (such as: A B and C Plots and Act Breaks)
Spelling and Grammar (up to a point! You should not be sending out screenplays littered with mistakes, not even on here, ponyboy)
Missed opportunities for jokes
Anything else that needs attention
I have a degree in screenwriting and experience working in script development for some of Hollywood's favourite producers.
My notes are thorough and "good" (client quote. Spoiler alert: his screenplay lacked imagination).
Script / Screenplay
6 days delivery
Notes on TV script
Full notes on TV script - structure, characters, story, series potential, logic, spelling, jokes