I've been a Hollywood screenwriter, development exec, and creative consultant... I've given feedback to professional writers at all levels... after evaluating thousands of scripts, I know how to make good work great! Here's what I'm offering:
Basic: I'll read your first act and provide notes on your characters and set-up for your story... with an added bonus: If I really like where things are going, I'll keep reading until you lose me, and then I'll let you know my thoughts about your script up to that point (including why I stopped).
Standard: I'll read your whole script -- whether I'm hooked or not -- and provide general thoughts on how you can improve it.
Premium: I'll give you the sort of detailed notes I provide showrunners and producers.