I have extensive experience in story writing and have published a short story in a compilation book. In this Gig I will edit and critique a story style text. My packages will vary depending on the factors that I edit and critique (see details below).
My editing & proofreading will include:
4. Sentence structure
My critique and feedback will be on:
1. Plot - includes plot holes, consistency with events and setting, etc.
2. Events - includes event progression, pacing, relevance to plot & C. development.
3. Setting - includes relevance and consistency with events, & quality of description.
4. Character development - includes relevance of C. development to plot & events, consistency with dialogue, and progression of C. development.
5. Dialogue - includes relevance to & consistency with C. development and expressive quality of dialogue.
My edits will be underlined words/sentences that have been corrected. My critique & feedback will be as comments throughout the document. I will provide one copy of the edited & critiqued document.
Gig Extra: A full separate document of my detailed critique of the narrative text.