The average reader is being pulled in a 100 different directions and your site is just one of them.
As soon as he lands up on your site, he also receives a facebook notification - his friend has just tagged him on a post.
He has a Choice : Should he stay and read your sales copy? OR should he go and read his best friend's post who has just tagged him?
Now, unless you have an attention grabbing headline that appeals to his innermost desires, he's going to leave your site and read that facebook post.
And this is exactly what's going to happen each and every second the visitor stays on your site. He has a choice : Should he read the next sentence OR should he go and check out another cat video on youtube or the trailer from the latest block buster. And this is exactly what I am going to offer - write each and every sentence that grabs the attention of your reader and makes him choose your page instead - each and every time.
Please send me a message with the details of your niche and the product before you order.