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I will developmental edit and line edit your fantasy, romance, litrpg and ya novels
Your words refined Your workbooks designed to convert
Turn your manuscript into a polished, publication-ready book or workbook. I help authors, coaches, educators, and entrepreneurs improve clarity, structure, flow, grammar, and reader engagement while c...
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Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
What people loved about this freelancer
sasukekorlo
Japan
I commissioned Morgan to edit the first half of my litRPG, which she was very attentive in detail and pointed out a lot of mistakes I was making in a very professional,...
sasukekorlo
Japan
This was the final line-edit for a long novel I wrote, so a lot of words to go over *over 150k. I was pleased with the errors Morgan found that I missed, as...
sasukekorlo
Japan
Morgan has delivered on combing through my first 8 chapters to change word choices, correct errors, and make suggestions on fixing my writing on a professional...
sasukekorlo
Japan
Morgan continues to deliver fine-point edits for my manuscript, helping to spring me along towards a finish line to publish my first book. I will continue working with her as I finish more chapters for edits.
sasukekorlo
Japan
This is the 2nd in a set of chapters for my litRPG that Morgan has edited. Her insight is helpful, and her edits spot-on for what I am looking for and to help...
About this Gig
Your fantasy, romance, LitRPG, or YA manuscript has a great concept, but the plot drifts, pacing stalls, character arcs weaken, or the prose lacks impact. You need developmental editing and line editing that strengthens the story before querying or publishing.
If these issues stay hidden, readers disengage and rewrites consume more time.
Your novel gets a focused developmental edit and line edit for fantasy novels, romance novels, LitRPG books, and YA fiction. Every recommendation is designed to improve story structure, clarity, flow, and immersion.
- Stronger storytelling with actionable developmental editing notes
- Clearer prose through professional line editing
- Better pacing, plot structure, and character development
- Stronger worldbuilding for fantasy and LitRPG projects
- More engaging scenes and dialogue for YA and romance fiction
You'll receive tracked suggestions, in-document comments, and a detailed editorial report with practical revision guidance. Perfect for novel development, manuscript critique, story analysis, and author coaching.
Send me a message today, and let's turn your draft into a novel readers won't forget.
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English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What genres do you specialize in?
Fantasy, romance, LitRPG, YA fiction, urban fantasy, paranormal romance, and dark fantasy.
What will you improve in my manuscript?
I focus on pacing, character development, dialogue, clarity, emotional impact, readability, and story flow.
Do you provide developmental and line editing?
Yes. I offer both developmental editing for story structure and line editing for prose improvement.
Can you edit unfinished or rough drafts?
Absolutely. I can help strengthen early drafts as well as polished manuscripts.
What makes your editing different?
I provide genre-specific feedback designed to improve reader engagement while preserving your unique writing voice.
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S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
I commissioned Morgan to edit the first half of my litRPG, which she was very attentive in detail and pointed out a lot of mistakes I was making in a very professional, polite way. She has been very proactive in communication, and has been helpful in other requests, even assisting me with my book blurb...
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
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Seller's Response
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
This was the final line-edit for a long novel I wrote, so a lot of words to go over *over 150k. I was pleased with the errors Morgan found that I missed, as well as filler words, redundancy, basic missed grammar, and word choice, all of which any writer can use to help their novel.
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
Morgan has delivered on combing through my first 8 chapters to change word choices, correct errors, and make suggestions on fixing my writing on a professional line-editing level, and in short time. I will continue to work with them as I write new stories.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
Morgan continues to deliver fine-point edits for my manuscript, helping to spring me along towards a finish line to publish my first book. I will continue working with her as I finish more chapters for edits.
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
This is the 2nd in a set of chapters for my litRPG that Morgan has edited. Her insight is helpful, and her edits spot-on for what I am looking for and to help me grow as an author. I will continue working with Morgan in the future.
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
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Reviews
5 reviews for this Gig
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Most relevant
S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
I commissioned Morgan to edit the first half of my litRPG, which she was very attentive in detail and pointed out a lot of mistakes I was making in a very professional, polite way. She has been very proactive in communication, and has been helpful in other requests, even assisting me with my book blurb...
$400-$600
Price
3 weeks
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
This was the final line-edit for a long novel I wrote, so a lot of words to go over *over 150k. I was pleased with the errors Morgan found that I missed, as well as filler words, redundancy, basic missed grammar, and word choice, all of which any writer can use to help their novel.
$200-$400
Price
9 days
Duration
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
Morgan has delivered on combing through my first 8 chapters to change word choices, correct errors, and make suggestions on fixing my writing on a professional line-editing level, and in short time. I will continue to work with them as I write new stories.
$200-$400
Price
10 days
Duration
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
Morgan continues to deliver fine-point edits for my manuscript, helping to spring me along towards a finish line to publish my first book. I will continue working with her as I finish more chapters for edits.
$200-$400
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?S sasukekorlo
Repeat Client
Japan
This is the 2nd in a set of chapters for my litRPG that Morgan has edited. Her insight is helpful, and her edits spot-on for what I am looking for and to help me grow as an author. I will continue working with Morgan in the future.
$200-$400
Price
6 days
Duration
A Seller's Response
Helpful?
