I will transform your fantasy manuscript with expert developmental editing

Nigeria

I speak English, German, French

Beta Reader

Hello! My name is Feranmi, and I’m a passionate beta reader and book lover who enjoys helping authors improve their stories. I provide honest, detailed, and constructive feedback on plot, pacing, cha...
About this Gig

You've written a book but deep down, you know something's off. The pacing drags. Characters feel flat. Your argument loses steam halfway through. That's where developmental editing transforms a draft into a story readers can't put down.


I'm a book developmental editor who rebuilds manuscripts from the inside out. I don't just fix typos. I solve structural problems that keep your book from working.


Full manuscript structure analysis (plot holes, pacing issues, narrative gaps)

Character arc development (motivation, consistency, reader connection)

Argument flow refinement (non-fiction logic, persuasive clarity)

Chapter-by-chapter pacing optimization

Detailed editorial letter + inline notes


I've edited 120+ manuscripts across fantasy. My authors have landed agents, hit bestseller lists, and most importantly felt proud to publish.



You'll get a manuscript that feels cohesive, compelling, and ready for the next stage. No vague feedback. No surface-level line edits. Just honest, actionable guidance that makes your book stronger.


Order now and let's turn your draft into the book it's meant to be

Language:

English

French

German

Genre:

Fantasy

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