I will beta read your manuscript

Peru

I speak English, Spanish

Writer and Researcher

I am an text editor and a specialist in style correction. I've edited multiple works, both literary and academic. I've worked in over 200 thesis and scientific articles, removing plagiarism, correctin...
About this Gig

Get detailed, professional structural feedback on your story from a published writer with an MFA in Creative Writing.


Reading your own manuscript objectively is almost impossible. As an experienced writer and editor with a Masters degree in Creative Writing, I provide comprehensive, constructive feedback to help you elevate your manuscript before query submission or self-publishing.


What I focus on in every critique:


  • Plot & Pacing: Tension, structural consistency, plot holes, and narrative momentum.
  • Characterization: Arc plausibility, voice distinction, depth, and motivation.
  • Worldbuilding & Scene Craft: Immersion, dialogue rhythm, and show-vs-tell balance.
  • Reader Experience: Emotional engagement, chapter hooks, and honest reader reactions.


What you will receive:


  • A detailed In-Depth Reader's Report (310 pages depending on word count) breaking down strengths, areas of improvement, and actionable solutions.
  • Line-by-line reactions/comments directly on your manuscript (upon request).


Note: This service focuses on story mechanics, structure, and characterization. If you need line editing or proofreading, check out my editing gig!

Genre:

Action

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Adventure

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Fanfiction

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Romance

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Science fiction

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Fantasy

Language:

English

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Spanish

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