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I will beta read and critique your romance or fantasy novel with detailed feedback
Gig Summary
Book Editor, Beta Reader, Developmental, Line, Copy Editing
Your manuscript deserves more than a spell-check. I'm a book editor and beta reader helping indie authors strengthen their stories and polish their manuscripts through developmental editing, line edit...
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Struggling with pacing, flat characters, or plot holes in your romance or fantasy novel? You deserve honest, developmental feedback before publishing.
I provide chapter-by-chapter editorial critiques that analyze what works, what drags, and why.
What You Receive:
- Separate In-Depth Editorial Report (PDF/Word)
- Chapter-by-Chapter Breakdown: pacing, plot tension & character arcs
- Worldbuilding & Dialogue Clarity audit
- Actionable revision roadmapno generic praise, no AI skims
Why Me:
- Level 1 Seller with 100% 5-star reviews
- Repeat author clients praising "unparalleled developmental analysis"
- 100% human, thorough evaluationnever AI generated
Genres:
Romance (Contemporary, Paranormal, Dark, Romantasy) | Fantasy (Epic, Urban, High) | Sci-Fi
Deliverables:
Clear, structured feedback file with page references. Your clean manuscript remains untouched.
Ready to see your story through a sharp reader's eyes? Send me your word count or order your sample package today.
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
Do you use AI or automated tools to review manuscripts?
Absolutely not. AI cannot track romance chemistry, emotional stakes, or complex magic systems across 300 pages. Every critique is 100% human, based on a dedicated read-through of your manuscript.
What is the difference between your beta reading and line editing?
Beta reading and developmental critique focus on big-picture storytelling: plot structure, pacing, character arcs, tension, dialogue authenticity, and worldbuilding consistency. I deliver a separate editorial report with chapter notes. I do not mark up your clean manuscript with grammar or typo edit
Why should I start with the Basic (7,500-word) package?
The Basic package is designed as a low-risk trial. It allows you to test my feedback depth, editorial style, and chapter-by-chapter breakdown on your opening chapters before committing your full manuscript.
Can you review manuscripts longer than 75,000 words?
Yes! For manuscripts exceeding 75k words, message me with your exact word count and genre. I will provide a custom offer with an honest, realistic timeline.
What format do you need, and what format do you deliver?
You can send your manuscript as a .docx, .pdf, or .rtf file. I will return a comprehensive, beautifully structured Editorial Feedback Report in .pdf or .docx format with clear page and chapter references.
Reviews
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A arlen_vale
United States
this beta read has been very insightful and helpful for my manuscript. they took the time to leave detailed noties on what works within the manuscript and why, while also helping identify points that could be strengthened and tightened. 10/10 i would definitely hire them again!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?G gelop2111
United States
Amos is always really easy to work with. very adaptable to everything I throw at him :D
$200-$400
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?Q queencobrra
United States
Amos really helped me to feel more confident in my book. I felt affirmed in areas I was proud of and supported in areas I wasn’t. Amos took my book out of my head and into the hands of a reader. Thank you for that.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?G gibwyld
United States
I highly recommend Amos for both beta reading and editing! Whenever I send a project, Amos returns work that is thought through thoroughly and carefully, well-organized, and delivered with clarity and timeliness.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?G gibwyld
United States
Amos has an unparalleled gift for developmental analysis and is a delight to work with! The insights are always on point, instructive, and communicated with skill, tact, and clarity. I feel very lucky to be learning from Amos!
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
Reviews
12 reviews for this Gig
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Rating Breakdown
- Seller communication level
- Quality of delivery
- Value of delivery
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Most relevant
A arlen_vale
United States
this beta read has been very insightful and helpful for my manuscript. they took the time to leave detailed noties on what works within the manuscript and why, while also helping identify points that could be strengthened and tightened. 10/10 i would definitely hire them again!
$100-$200
Price
3 weeks
Duration
Helpful?G gelop2111
United States
Amos is always really easy to work with. very adaptable to everything I throw at him :D
$200-$400
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?Q queencobrra
United States
Amos really helped me to feel more confident in my book. I felt affirmed in areas I was proud of and supported in areas I wasn’t. Amos took my book out of my head and into the hands of a reader. Thank you for that.
$50
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?G gibwyld
United States
I highly recommend Amos for both beta reading and editing! Whenever I send a project, Amos returns work that is thought through thoroughly and carefully, well-organized, and delivered with clarity and timeliness.
$50
Price
2 days
Duration
Helpful?G gibwyld
United States
Amos has an unparalleled gift for developmental analysis and is a delight to work with! The insights are always on point, instructive, and communicated with skill, tact, and clarity. I feel very lucky to be learning from Amos!
$100-$200
Price
4 days
Duration
Helpful?
