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Anna Dal Castel

@anna_storyarch
5.0(3)

I find what is not working in your story and show you how to fix it

Brazil
Spanish, English, Portuguese
About me
I help writers find exactly what’s not working in their story — and fix it. If something feels off in your writing but you can’t pinpoint why, that’s where I come in. As a historian and story architect, I identify exactly where your story breaks — from structural issues to weak immersion and inconsistencies before they reach your readers. You’ll get clear, actionable feedback on what works, what doesn’t, and how to fix it. No fluff. Just precise, honest insights that make your story actually work. ... Read more

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I will show you where your historical fiction works, and where it breaks
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I will find what is wrong with your story and fix it fast

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Work experience

Fiverr

Fiverr

Freelance • 17 yrs 8 mos

Professional Historian & Story Architect

Jan 2020 - Present6 yrs 4 mos

I specialize in structural issues, weak immersion, and inconsistencies — strengthening narrative flow, character engagement, and historical authenticity. I turn “something feels off” into clear, actionable solutions that make stories stronger, sharper, and more compelling.

Interior Designer

Jan 2013 - May 202411 yrs 4 mos

12 years of experience in spatial design and structural planning — developing a strong sense of flow, coherence, and user experience. I now apply these principles to narrative structure, helping stories feel cohesive, immersive, and intentionally built.

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    ekravets

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    5

    Anna is a careful, caring, incredible reader. Her precise inline comments showed a love of the material that went well beyond "just doing a job." I could go on and on, but instead, you should hire her and see for yourself. I always looked forward to her critiques, they were never unfair. I particularly...

    $100-$200

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    12 days

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    ekravets

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    I was a bit hesitating to ask Anna to look through the manuscript at such an early stage, but I deeply appreciated her thoughtful remarks. She identified a structural weakness that I need to give some serious thought to before continuing the work, and that was very valuable. Additionally, she found soft...

    Up to $50

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    4 days

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    ekravets

    Repeat Client

    US

    United States

    5

    Thank you so much for your analysis, you are an exceptionally skilled reader and editor and I cannot praise your level of detail attention and understand enough, you engaged so seriously with the work and it was a treasure trove of flags to me that I was able to investigate and track down. It is fair...

    $50-$100

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    4 days

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