I will provide developmental editing, a structural critique, and an editorial letter

United States

I speak English

Literary Agent Research, Query and Submission Support

Hi, I’m Arden, a publishing consultant helping fiction and nonfiction writers navigate traditional publishing. I help save writers time and reduce guesswork through targeted literary-agent research ba...
About this Gig

Congratulations on finishing your book draft! The next step is making sure your story is strong enough to impress a traditional literary agent.


Every year, thousands of brilliant books get rejected because of plot holes, slow pacing, or weak structure. As a professional editor with a degree in book publishing, I am here to help you fix those flaws. I will give your manuscript the deep, structural care it needs so you can submit your work with absolute confidence.


What I offer in this gig:

  • Developmental Editing: Direct, hands-on inline notes inside your file to fix character arcs, narrative pacing, and chapter layout.
  • Manuscript Critique: A simple, high-level review report analyzing what parts of your story work and what areas need your attention.
  • Professional Editorial Letter: A detailed, elite industry letter outlining a clear step-by-step roadmap to make your manuscript stand out.


I provide supportive, human, and practical feedback tailored to your unique voice. Let's polish your manuscript before you send your query letter to industry gatekeepers.


Message me today to discuss your book details!

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Memoir/ biography

Language:

English

Book type:

Other

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