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I will beta read your manuscript with 2 readers, inline comments and chapter reports
DOUBLE BETA READERS
We’re Max & Ella, a couple who love discovering stories through the eyes of real readers. We independently beta read manuscripts and give honest, thoughtful feedback from two different perspectives. W...
About this Gig
Two Readers. Two Perspectives. A Better Read.
Finished your manuscript but wondering, Will readers understand it? Will they connect with my characters? Where might they get bored, confused, excited, or emotionally invested?
That's where Max & Ella come in.
We are a couple who independently read your manuscript as genuine readers not editors trying to rewrite your story. You'll receive two different reading experiences, giving you a clearer picture of how your story may connect with readers.
What you'll receive:
- Detailed inline comments throughout your manuscript
- Chapter-by-chapter feedback after each chapter
- Honest reactions to characters, dialogue, pacing, plot, and emotions
- Moments that made us excited, confused, curious, or disconnected
- Specific, constructive suggestions to strengthen your manuscript
- Questions, inconsistencies, and areas that may need more development
- Separate perspectives from both Max and Ella
We won't simply say something is good or bad. We will explain why and offer useful reader-focused feedback.
Our goal is to help you improve your manuscript without changing your unique voice
Have a manuscript over 30,000 words? Please message us so we can discuss
Language:
English
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What does the double beta reading include?
Both Max and Ella independently read your manuscript and provide their own honest reader perspectives. You’ll receive detailed inline comments throughout the manuscript, plus chapter-by-chapter feedback after each chapter.
Will Max and Ella give the same feedback?
Not necessarily, and that’s the value of having two readers. We read independently, so you may receive different reactions, observations, questions, and perspectives. Where we agree, it can help highlight areas that deserve attention.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
We focus on the reader experience, including characters, plot, pacing, dialogue, emotions, clarity, engagement, confusing moments, inconsistencies, and areas that may need strengthening. Our feedback is honest, specific, and constructive.
Can you beta read manuscripts over 30,000 words?
Yes! Please message us before ordering if your manuscript is over 30,000 words. We’ll be happy to discuss the word count, requirements, turnaround time, and the best option for your project.
