Luna

Luna did an excellent job with my beta read, and this was my second time working with her. Just like the first time, her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and clearly based on a careful read of the full manuscript. She does a great job balancing what works with constructive, actionable suggestions on... See more

Luna's report on my manuscript was excellent. She was very detailed and thorough with my story and provided very detailed feedback. I got a full reader experience from her report and honest opinions of every bit of the story, including some suggestions for me to help tighten the prose. I'm beyond satisfied... See more

Luna provided a thoughtful, detailed, and insightful beta-reading report for my manuscript, Monsters of Light: Return of Erebbadon. She demonstrated genuine engagement with the story, its characters, and the larger narrative. Her feedback highlighted important strengths while identifying areas where... See more

I think Bettina did an excellent job beta reading my manuscript. I found her feedback extremely valuable as I plan my next steps. Her grasp of what I was trying to accomplish in the story was far beyond what I expected, and the insights she shared will take my writing to the next level. I would strongly recommend her as a beta reader to anyone.

Luna did a great job with my beta read. I could tell she actually took the time to pay attention to the story, characters, and how everything developed throughout the book. Her feedback was detailed and she pointed out both what she enjoyed and areas she thought could be improved, with clear examples... See more