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bevely j
@beverly_jonh
Expert Developmental Editor Turning Rough Drafts Into Bestsellers
United States
English
About me
A great idea isn't enough to write a bestseller; it needs flawless execution. I am a professional Developmental Editor specializing in Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, and Thrillers. I don't just look for typos—I dive deep into your manuscript’s core. I fix plot holes, pacing issues, weak character arcs, and world-building inconsistencies. I provide honest, actionable feedback that elevates your story from a rough draft to an unputdownable novel. Let’s collaborate to make your book a masterpiece! Send me a message today.
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Beta Reading
I will be your beta reader for dark romance romantasy and horror with detailed feedback

Developmental Editing
I will do developmental edit and manuscript critique for your ya romance fantasy novel
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sophiejamez

Portugal
Working with Beverly was a game-changer for my novel. As a LitRPG author, it’s hard to find a beta reader who actually understands 'system mechanics' and 'progression,' but she nailed it. She found several plot holes I had completely missed and gave me brilliant advice on how to fix my pacing in the...
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simonfinrel

United Kingdom
I'm very pleased with the quality of feedback I received. Bevely provided detailed and constructive insights on plot, pacing and character development, which were extremely helpful in improving my manuscript. I would highly recommend this seller to anyone looking for a through and thoughtful beta reader.
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