I will be your contemporary romance beta reader, leave inline comments, with report

Brazil

I speak English

Get the Feedback That Makes Your Story Shine

Hi, I'm HELENA, a professional beta reader, alpha reader, and manuscript critic with 8 years of experience helping authors strengthen their stories before publication. I specialize in romance, erotica...
About this Gig

Want to know how your romance story feels to a real reader?


I'll beta read your romance novel, leave thoughtful inline comments & answer your beta reader report questions based on my reading experience.


I'll pay attention to:

  • Plot, structure & pacing
  • Character development & motivations
  • Dialogue & repetitive phrasing
  • Confusing sections & continuity issues
  • Emotional impact
  • Voice & tone consistency
  • Timeline & story flow
  • Unnatural or formulaic writing
  • Romantic chemistry & relationship development
  • Romance tropes & reader satisfaction


I'll also point out repeated emotional reactions, gestures, phrasing, or dialogue patterns when they genuinely stand out.


What you'll receive:

  • Your manuscript with inline comments
  • Completed answers to your report questions
  • Honest reader feedback
  • Romance-specific feedback


I'm not here to rewrite your story or change your voice. Ill read it as a genuine reader and tell you what worked, what pulled me out of the story, and where the reading experience could be stronger.


I can beta read contemporary, steamy, enemies-to-lovers, historical, and other romance stories, including lead magnets & short manuscripts.


Send me your manuscript and lets get started!

Genre:

Horror/ thriller

Literary fiction

Mystery

Romance

Language:

English

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