I will beta reader fantasy novel beta reader romance beta reader alpha beta reading

5.0
5.0

United States

I speak English, French, Spanish, German

3 orders completed

DETAILED BETA READING WITH HONEST FEEDBACK

Hello there, I’m Olivia Smith, a passionate and experienced writer dedicated to helping authors and aspiring storytellers bring their ideas to life. With a strong background in content writing, I spec...
About this Gig

Many stories lose readers because of slow pacing, weak character motivation, confusing scenes, flat dialogue, or emotional moments that don't fully connect. As your beta reader, I identify the hidden weaknesses affecting reader engagement & story flow. I provide professional beta reading & manuscript critique for fiction and nonfiction authors who want honest, reader-focused feedback before publishing or querying.


I read:

Romance, Fantasy, Horror, Thriller, Mystery, Sci-Fi, YA, Literary & Contemporary Fiction.


What you'll receive:

  • Honest beta reader feedback
  • Plot structure& pacing analysis
  • Character dev critique
  • Dialogue & scene clarity review
  • Reader engagement insights
  • Identification of confusing or slow sections
  • Actionable manuscript critique report


My feedback helps you strengthen emotional impact, improve immersion, & revise your manuscript with clarity & confidence while preserving your unique author voice.


Note: Looking for honest, thoughtful feedback from a dedicated reader?

I provide supportive, honest, constructive and detailed feedback to help you move forward with confidence.


Message me and let's collaborate to help your story reach its full potential.

Genre:

Fanfiction

Horror/ thriller

Romance

Science fiction

Fantasy

Language:

English

German

Delivery style preference

Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.

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3 reviews for this Gig
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    marklawford

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Truly outstanding. As a beta reader, identified exactly what I was trying to achieve, and gave actionable notes on how to get me even closer to my own vision. Will 100% engage again. Highly recommended.

    $100-$200

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    2 weeks

    Duration

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    louori

    US

    United States

    5

    First time using Fiverr and first time writing a story. and I must say working with Olivia was a fantastic experience, true legend. Her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and incredibly helpful in identifying both strengths and areas for improvement. She clearly took the time to engage with my story,...

    $50-$100

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    2 weeks

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    anna_collinss

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Excellent experience working with booksmithpro. The delivery was detailed, thoughtful, and focused on the areas that mattered most for my fantasy novel. I proudly recommend her for any beta reading project. Thank you

    Up to $50

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    2 days

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3 reviews for this Gig
5.0

(3)
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Rating Breakdown
  • Seller communication level
    5
  • Quality of delivery
    5
  • Value of delivery
    5
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Most relevant
  • M

    marklawford

    GB

    United Kingdom

    5

    Truly outstanding. As a beta reader, identified exactly what I was trying to achieve, and gave actionable notes on how to get me even closer to my own vision. Will 100% engage again. Highly recommended.

    $100-$200

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • L

    louori

    US

    United States

    5

    First time using Fiverr and first time writing a story. and I must say working with Olivia was a fantastic experience, true legend. Her feedback was detailed, thoughtful, and incredibly helpful in identifying both strengths and areas for improvement. She clearly took the time to engage with my story,...

    $50-$100

    Price

    2 weeks

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No
  • A
    image-docs

    anna_collinss

    CA

    Canada

    5

    Excellent experience working with booksmithpro. The delivery was detailed, thoughtful, and focused on the areas that mattered most for my fantasy novel. I proudly recommend her for any beta reading project. Thank you

    Up to $50

    Price

    2 days

    Duration

    Helpful?
    Yes
    No