I will analyze and strengthen your novel
Professional Writer Copywriter and Storyteller
About this Gig
Stuck on your plot? Struggling with a character? Not sure where your story should go next?
With 9+ years of professional fiction ghostwriting experience, I can help you develop, troubleshoot, and strengthen your story before you spend countless hours rewriting it.
I specialize in dark romance, but I also work across romance, fantasy, dark fantasy, cyberpunk, science fiction, mystery, psychological thriller, crime thriller, and suspense.
Whether you're starting with a rough idea, stuck halfway through a manuscript, or struggling to figure out your ending, we'll work through the problem together and create a practical path forward.
I can help with:
Plot development and story structure
Character development and character arcs
Pacing and chapter progression
Plot holes and inconsistencies
Conflict, tension, and stakes
Romance and relationship dynamics
Scene and chapter planning
Twists, reveals, and endings
Writer's block and story problems
Series and sequel planning
You'll receive practical, honest feedback designed to strengthen your story while keeping your creative vision at the center.
Language:
English
Book type:
Fiction
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
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FAQ
What genres can you help with?
I specialize in dark romance, but I also work with romance, fantasy, dark fantasy, cyberpunk, science fiction, mystery, psychological thriller, crime thriller, and suspense.
Can you review an entire novel?
Yes. Full manuscript reviews are available through custom offers. Please message me with your manuscript's word count and requirements.
Do I need a finished manuscript?
No. I can review anything from an early draft to a completed manuscript. In fact, getting developmental feedback before the final draft can help prevent major rewrites later.
Do you edit grammar and spelling?
This gig focuses on developmental feedback rather than proofreading or line editing. I'll focus on the story itself—plot, characters, pacing, structure, conflict, and overall reader experience.
Will you rewrite my manuscript for me?
This gig is focused on consultation and story development rather than full rewriting. If you'd like me to rewrite or ghostwrite your manuscript, please see my ghostwriting service or contact me for a custom offer.
Will you tell me if something isn't working?
Yes. My feedback is honest but constructive. I'll identify problems clearly and explain why something may not be working, along with suggestions for improving it.
Can you help with romance tropes and relationship dynamics?
Yes. I'm particularly experienced with dark romance and can help develop romantic tension, character dynamics, conflict, emotional progression, and trope execution.
Can you review my first chapter?
Absolutely. A first-chapter review is a great use of the Basic package, particularly if you want to know whether your opening is engaging enough to keep readers reading.

