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I will deliver an in depth fiction review with developmental feedback and inline notes
Sales Machine, sales representative, sales expert, cold calling, appointment set
Hi, I’m Briget—a results-driven Sales Specialist with a proven track record of turning low sales into high conversions. I specialize in lead generation, B2B sales, cold calling, sales funnels, and app...
About this Gig
Your story deserves more than a simple beta read.
I provide a professional fiction manuscript critique designed to help authors strengthen their work before publishing, self-publishing, or querying agents.
I go beyond basic reader impressions by analyzing your manuscript from both a reader's and developmental perspective. You'll receive honest, constructive feedback focused on what works, what doesn't, and how to improve your story's impact.
My review includes detailed feedback on plot structure, pacing, character development, dialogue, suspense, emotional resonance, reader engagement, and overall story flow. I also provide inline comments throughout your manuscript, identify plot holes and inconsistencies, and offer practical recommendations you can apply immediately.
I specialize in thriller, mystery, suspense, crime, fantasy, romance, science fiction, psychological, and literary fiction.
My goal is to help you create a stronger, more engaging manuscript that keeps readers turning pages from beginning to end.
Sales stage:
Mid-funnel (Nurturing)
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Bottom-funnel (Closing)
Engagement model:
Performance-based
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FAQ
What genres do you review?
I review suspense, thriller, mystery, crime, fantasy, romance, science fiction, psychological fiction, literary fiction, and most other fiction genres.
Do you edit grammar and spelling?
This gig focuses on beta reading and manuscript critique. I may highlight recurring issues, but it is not a copyediting or proofreading service
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You'll receive detailed feedback on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, reader engagement, story structure, and overall effectiveness.
Will you provide inline comments?
A. Yes. I provide inline comments directly in your manuscript, along with a summary of my findings and recommendations.
Can you identify plot holes and inconsistencies?
A. Absolutely. I carefully evaluate story logic, continuity, pacing issues, and plot inconsistencies.
Is my manuscript kept confidential?
A. Yes. All manuscripts and project details are treated as strictly confidential.
Do you review unfinished manuscripts?
Yes. I can review completed manuscripts, partial manuscripts, sample chapters, prologues, and works in progress.
Can you review self-published books?
Yes. I work with both traditionally published and self-published authors.
What file formats do you accept?
I accept Microsoft Word (.docx), PDF, and Google Docs files.
What if my manuscript exceeds your listed word count?
Don't hesitate to get in touch with me before ordering. I'll create a custom offer tailored to your manuscript length and requirements.
