I will beta read, developmental edit, and critique your fantasy and sci fi novel

United States

I speak English, Spanish

Book Surgeon

Consider me your book’s most dedicated mad scientist. I combine deep developmental editing with sharp-eyed beta reading to diagnose pacing flaws, test worldbuilding rules, and elevate narrative tensio...
About this Gig

Hello Author,


Struggling to hook readers or keep your sci-fi or fantasy world from feeling paper-thin? Pouring your soul into a manuscript is hard; trusting someone to tear into your draft is even harder. You need an editor who genuinely gets speculative fictionsomeone who tracks magic systems, flags pacing dead zones, and sharpens character arcs without flattening your voice.


As a dedicated narrative editor, I build complex speculative worlds and shape raw drafts into gripping page-turners. I spot lore holes and weak narrative tension long before your readers do.


Here is what we tackle together:


  • Developmental Editing: Pinpoint plot holes, saggy middles, and clunky dialogue.


  • Worldbuilding Critique: Stress-test magic systems, factions, and internal lore.


  • Actionable Feedback: Get honest notes through inline edits and a detailed report.


Whether self-publishing or querying agents, your story deserves to shine. Lets make your manuscript unforgettable.


Send a message now; let's talk about your book!

Genre:

Fanfiction

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Horror/ thriller

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Literary fiction

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Romance

Language:

English

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