I will provide coverage and feedback for your screenplay

About this Gig

Hi, I'm Charles and I'm a novelist and script editor. I analyze and rewrite screenplays until they're ready to enter the decision room. Tell me where you want your screenplay to land and I'll help you get there.

After hundreds of scripts, the issues I see most often (clunky transitions, scenes that start too late, overdone dialogue, unnecessary descriptions, and beat structures that don't quite land) are also the most fixable -- once you can see them. As a writer myself, I know how hard it is to distance yourself from your own pages, so I won't just flag what isn't working: I'll show you why and how to fix it, with notes and sample rewrites. Whether you're aiming for a contest, a manager's desk, or a personal project, my coverage will be geared toward your vision and goals.

Here's what you'll get:

• Actionable notes
• Clear, concrete examples
• A roadmap to rewrite from
• A logline that captures the spirit of your work

Thanks for checking out my gig. Let's bring out the best in your story.