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I will deliver substantive developmental editing
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I’m Ciara, USA Today Bestselling and award-winning hybrid author who has worked as a professional developmental and acquisitions editor for a traditional publisher. As a freelancer, I work with both e...
About this Gig
Pacing that pops: Does your story keep the reader turning the pages?
Caring for characters: Are your characters three-dimensional? Are they true to their emotional set?
Theatrical tension: Is there enough excitement and motivation present without unnecessary melodrama?
Stellar story: Does the overall story make sense, fit your target audience, and is it structured well from start to finish?
Phenomenal firsts: Does the opening line, first paragraph, first page, first chapter sell the book?
Not so obvious overuse: Do you overuse phrases or words that become annoying to readers?
Dialogue tags that dazzle: Do you engage the reader with your fresh tags?
Body language is the bomb: Did you write body language that shows your characters emotion in a fresh way? Are the actions clear for the reader to follow?
AND MORE:
*Specific to your writing: If I locate an area of weakness in your writing, Ill take the time to explain what and how to fix the issue as well as provide a list of resources tailored to your specific needs.
Language:
English
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Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
Do you work on more than just the big picture of a book?
Yes! The edits I provide are more than industry standards. It is tailored to your specific needs. Beyond the edits, I also provide a list of resources for any weak areas of your writing. We all have them!
Will you speak to me or only provide written feedback?
I offer the service of a thirty-minute zoom call as an additional service for $30.00. During this session, we will review anything you need extra assistance with, or I am happy to answer any questions beyond the development edit. This call will be a discussion on the subject of your choice.
What if I have questions about my edit?
No problem! You are welcome to send questions specific to the edit up to thirty days after your edit is complete.
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virginiejoly
Belgium
Ciara Knight is an excellent editor who exceeded my expectations with her professional and detailed work. Her quick responsiveness and language fluency made collaborating a breeze. Aside from a deep-dive developmental edit, I also received handy tips & tricks on how to improve my writing. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED! 💪
$1,000-$2,500
Price
4 weeks
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Seller's Response
Helpful?C cramer2480
United States
This is my 3rd collaboration with Ciara. She is an exceptional editor and her insights have made each of my books better. For anyone considering Ciara to improve your manuscript, I whole heartedly recommend you do. She is simply great at what she does.
$1,000-$2,500
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jomobenun
United States
Ciara provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book, “Pebbles and the Biggest Number”. She was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, Ciara!
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?R 
ritamclean
United States
Ciara edited a 30,000 word fantasy story for me. Her communication is level 10. She was very responsive, even when on vacation. She kept me informed on the status of the project. Her quality of work was top notch. I was highly impressed when I received a detailed editorial consisting of 9 pages of...
$200-$400
Price
Helpful?C cramer2480
United States
Ciara is great. She is insightful, professional yet warm and friendly. Her experience shows in her feedback.
$600-$800
Price
Helpful?
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V virginiejoly
Belgium
Ciara Knight is an excellent editor who exceeded my expectations with her professional and detailed work. Her quick responsiveness and language fluency made collaborating a breeze. Aside from a deep-dive developmental edit, I also received handy tips & tricks on how to improve my writing. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED! 💪
$1,000-$2,500
Price
4 weeks
Duration
C Seller's Response
Helpful?C cramer2480
United States
This is my 3rd collaboration with Ciara. She is an exceptional editor and her insights have made each of my books better. For anyone considering Ciara to improve your manuscript, I whole heartedly recommend you do. She is simply great at what she does.
$1,000-$2,500
Price
4 weeks
Duration
Helpful?J jomobenun
United States
Ciara provided helpful and encouraging feedback on my children’s picture book, “Pebbles and the Biggest Number”. She was friendly, quick to respond, and delivered in a flash. Pleasure working with you, Ciara!
$50
Price
1 day
Duration
Helpful?R ritamclean
United States
Ciara edited a 30,000 word fantasy story for me. Her communication is level 10. She was very responsive, even when on vacation. She kept me informed on the status of the project. Her quality of work was top notch. I was highly impressed when I received a detailed editorial consisting of 9 pages of...
$200-$400
Price
Helpful?C cramer2480
United States
Ciara is great. She is insightful, professional yet warm and friendly. Her experience shows in her feedback.
$600-$800
Price
Helpful?
