I will review your UK civil service application
Level 1
Has met certain performance criteria and shows strong potential in the marketplace.
About this Gig
Applying for a UK Civil Service role and want an expert second opinion before you submit?
With over 20 years' UK Civil Service experience, I understand the Success Profiles framework and what strong application evidence needs to demonstrate.
I will review your application document, identify weaknesses and show you where your evidence could be clearer and stronger. Where necessary, I may ask targeted questions to uncover stronger evidence from your genuine experience.
I can review your CV, Statement of Suitability, Personal/Supporting Statement or Success Profiles behaviour example.
My review can identify:
- Weak or missing evidence
- Examples that don't fully meet the criteria
- Unclear personal contribution
- Weak STAR structure
- Missing results or measurable impact
- Generic or descriptive content
This service covers one existing document. For writing from scratch, please contact me first.
For feedback on a single Behaviour Example, see my dedicated Behaviour service.
Suitable for AO, EO, HEO and SEO applications.
Please send your document, the job advert and any sift feedback.
Recruitment decisions are made by the hiring department results can't be guaranteed.
Language:
English
Content type:
Personal statement
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Documents
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Other
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What Civil Service documents can you review?
I can review a Civil Service CV, Statement of Suitability, Personal/Supporting Statement or Success Profiles behaviour example. This Gig covers one document. If you would like several documents reviewed, please contact me for a custom offer.
Which Civil Service grades do you support?
I regularly support AO, EO, HEO and SEO applications. If you're applying at Grade 7 or another level, please message me with the vacancy before ordering so I can confirm whether I can help.
Will you rewrite my application?
This Gig is primarily a review and diagnosis service. I will identify weaknesses and explain where your application could be strengthened. If substantial rewriting is needed, we can discuss this separately and I can provide a custom offer where appropriate.
What do I need to send you?
Please send the document you would like reviewed and the relevant job advert or job description. If you have previous sift scores or feedback, please send these too, as they can help me identify where your application may be losing marks.
Will you add or invent experience to make my application stronger?
No. I only work with your genuine experience. If important evidence is missing or unclear, I may ask targeted questions to help uncover relevant details, results or examples from your actual experience.
Can you guarantee that I will pass the sift or get an interview?
No. Recruitment decisions and scores are determined by the hiring department, so I cannot guarantee a particular score or interview. My role is to help you identify weaknesses and strengthen how your genuine evidence and experience are presented.
