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I will professionally analyse and develop your fantasy or space opera story
Out Of This World Story Coaching For Fantasy Authors!
Hi, I'm Chris, a First-Class Creative Writing graduate and CIEP member specialising in space fantasy, action, and speculative fiction.
As a writer myself, I know how much time and effort it takes to ...
About this Gig
I provide thoughtful developmental feedback for fiction authors who want clear, constructive insight into their manuscript, helping shape your ideas into stronger and more compelling stories.
Rather than focusing only on surface-level errors, I look at the bigger story picture: plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, worldbuilding, structure, clarity and overall reader impact. My aim is to help you understand what is working, what may need strengthening, and how your story can become more robust, more effective and more engaging whilst preserving your unique authorial voice.
You will receive:
- A tailored and tier appropriate manuscript assessment using my 10 step critical process, designed to provide valuable developmental feedback on your story, structure, characters, worldbuilding and more.
- A manuscript scorecard illustrating your story's strengths and weaknesses.
- Notes on recurring spelling, grammar or punctuation issues where they affect readability.
This service is ideal for fantasy, space opera, space fantasy, dystopian and speculative fiction authors seeking actionable feedback on their manuscript, opening chapters, scenes or overall story concept.
Language:
English
Content type:
Film/TV scripts
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Book
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Short story
Delivery style preference
Please inform the freelancer of any preferences or concerns regarding the use of AI tools in the completion and/or delivery of your order.
FAQ
What genres do you specialise in?
I specialise in fantasy, space opera, space fantasy, dystopian, mythological and speculative fiction. I am also happy to review related genres with a strong focus on story, character, worldbuilding and structure.
What kind of feedback will I receive?
You'll receive detailed, constructive feedback on plot, pacing, character development, dialogue, worldbuilding, and overall story structure.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
My primary focus is developmental feedback and manuscript critique. Limited rewriting may be included where examples help illustrate a suggestion.
Is my work kept confidential?
Absolutely. Your manuscript and ideas remain your intellectual property and will never be shared with anyone else.
Can you edit unfinished manuscripts?
Absolutely. Whether you have a completed draft or work in progress, I can provide feedback to help strengthen your story.
Should I contact you before ordering?
Yes, especially for larger projects. Sending a brief description of your manuscript beforehand helps ensure I can provide the best service for your needs.
Do you edit in British or American English?
By default, I edit using British English spelling and conventions. If you prefer American English or another style guide, please let me know before ordering.
